Language

Overview

We write the way a good host talks: warm, plain and sure. Real ingredients, real places, no food jargon and no promises about changing your life. If a line would sound odd said across the counter, rewrite it.

Voice

Three qualities define how Balboa sounds, on a menu or on a screen. Choose one to see what it means in practice.

Fresh
Coastal
Warm
Overview

We talk about food the way the farm does: what it is, where it came from, when it was picked. Specific beats fancy every time.

We are
Specific Seasonal Honest Simple
We are not
Vague Fancy Jargon Boastful
In practice

The voice is easiest to see in real lines. Each one shows one rule at work.

Strawberries from the farm up the coast, picked this morning.

Say where it's from

The farm and the morning do more than any adjective. If you know where it came from, say so.

Avocado toast: Fallbrook avocados, sourdough, lemon, flaky salt.

Name the ingredients

A list of real things reads fresher than the word fresh ever will.

Grab a table on the patio, we'll bring it out.

Talk like the host

Contractions, short sentences, and the way we would actually say it to you.

The peaches are done for the year. The nectarines are better anyway.

Calm when things change

Seasons end. Say what happened and what is good instead. No apology paragraph.

Do and don’t

The same rules, side by side, where our words show up most.

Signs
Do

Organic coffee. Farm-fresh breakfast and lunch. Patio's open.

Don’t

A premium coffee experience awaits you.

Menu
Do

Harbor bowl: farro, roasted squash, feta, soft herbs.

Don’t

Our signature artisanal breakfast creation.

Posts
Do

First strawberries of the season are in. Come early, they go fast.

Don’t

Rise and grind, legends. Who is ready to crush it?

Replies
Do

Sorry about the wait. The next coffee is on us.

Don’t

We apologize for any inconvenience this may have caused.

Writing tips

A few habits keep the voice steady, whoever is writing.

01
Read it out loud

If it sounds like a good host, it is right. If it sounds like a website, cut it down.

02
Say where it's from

The farm, the coast, the morning it was picked. Never locally sourced.

03
Name the thing

Fallbrook avocados, not avocado. The harbor, not the waterfront. Specific words are the local ones.

04
One idea per line

Short sentences. A second idea gets its own.

05
Capitals are for the small print

PT Mono in capitals is for hours, addresses and labels. Everything else is sentence case.

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